Thursday, October 21, 2010
Changes.
After the writing conference I had with my group on Thursday, it really helped me get a better understanding of the identity my blog was portraying. For my essay, I think I will drop my last paragraph about fashion gossip, and relate it to updating and people who are fashion forward. I want to revise some of my other paragraphs and connect each one to how the blog and fashion updates because aI think that was one of strongest ideas brought up to me during our conference.
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I suggest you can read the book "they say, i say" first and get a sense of summarize your ideas. It really helps :)
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