Essay One.

When first getting the essay one, it was a stressful processes trying to find a good fashion blog that I could try to find identity. I was thrilled when I found Fashionista.com because it had elements that I could look at to write a good essay. I think the whole writing process was kinda stressful for me at first. I have never written an essay on identity, and I was confused on what identity really was. As I started looking further in the blog, it became easier finding a clear identity but it was still a little difficult to get it on paper. I thought my essay was alright, it was an stressful week and I think I could have added more evidence and examples from the book and worded things a lot differently.